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Wedding Dance (canon) (art) ( torry28 )

This is a brief view of Alma Jr. and Kurt's wedding and the father, daughter dance.
I borrowed the characters from Anni, no disrespect meant to her or the actors portraying the characters of BBM.
Everyone familiar with the story is aware Jack is no longer alive at this stage. But my imagination allows him to talk to Ennis and reveal to him some occurrences still to come in the future.

             " Daughter of Mine"

    These are the thoughts of a father
  On the wedding day of his daughter
    As his mind wanders back to the
          first time he held her

He looks at her now, the same pride in his eyes
     As onto the dance floor they glide
This is the dance of the bride and the father

  Dance with me daughter of mine
     On this you wedding day
  Dance with me daughter of mine
      You'll soon be going away

I love you so, since you first began
  Now you found a new man

But I love you so, and this you must know
          That my love won't falter
       So dance with me daughter
        Beautiful daughter of mine.
            We walk down the aisle
           On my face there's a smile
   But deep in my heart there's a tear
           Our friends and relations
            are there in the church
With smiles on their faces they stare
         As we walk t'ward the man
         who has stolen your heart
   And to whom I must give you away
But I wish you love and happiness too
        On this your wedding day

               The dance has begun
             We twirl around the floor
But I know you're not my little girl any more


  A lovely young woman has taken her place
And there's happiness written all over her face
But always remember although we must part
 You may leave my arms, but never my heart

                 ( Continues at the Reception )

         "She is beautiful, Cowboy."

"Thank you Jack, I think so too!!"


        "Damn, someone must have spiked the punch"

                            ( Later Down the Road )

      "Is it time, Jack?"                                     "Not yet, Cowboy, but soon."
"Will I ...will I be able to....?"                          "Hold  your first Grandson?

  "Yes Ennis, Lizzy is going to have a little brother.
            It's wonderful don't you think?
   Junior and Kurt with two girls of their own.
       And Bobby and Francine combining
            the Del Mar and Twist blood.
         Never would have dreamed it."

"Jack? I love you, always have, you do know that now, don't you?"

"I do, Ennis, I always known, we'll be together soon , Babe.
until then tell little Ennis Jack how much his two grandpas love him."

             "I miss you so much, Jack."

"Me too, Ennis, soon Babe, I will bring us home soon."

               Song by John Mc Dermott



( 26 comments — Leave a comment )
May. 24th, 2009 11:24 pm (UTC)
That was beautiful, absolutely beautiful.
May. 25th, 2009 03:27 pm (UTC)
Thank you, I am pleased you like it.
May. 24th, 2009 11:32 pm (UTC)
"Jack? I love you, always have, you do know that now, don't you?"

"I do, Ennis, I always known, we'll be together soon , Babe.
until then tell little Ennis Jack how much his two grandpas love him."

"I miss you so much, Jack."

"Me too, Ennis, soon Babe, I will bring us home soon."

This just had me crying so hard!!! Especially the last line.....God....Ennis so alone his whole life after Jack's death, and Jack promising that he'll soon bring them home, up on BBM. **sobs** I've always believed that Jack was waiting for Ennis to get him to BBM, their heaven.

This was absolutely BEAUTIFUL and moving, Adela. Your drawings are gems. I fell in love with the one of Jack when he said "she is beautiful, cowboy", and with the one of Ennis when he said "thank you Jack, I think so too". AMAZING. Those drawings are really perfect, perfect. Their faces and expressions are so them.

And I totally adore Junior's wedding dress. ♥

Thank you so much, babe. I love it.

Big hugs.

May. 25th, 2009 03:30 pm (UTC)
Sorry about making you cry.
Thanks for for the nice comment.
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May. 25th, 2009 03:33 pm (UTC)
Yes it is, thank you for commenting. It means so much to me.
May. 25th, 2009 12:35 am (UTC)
beautiful. Torry

May. 25th, 2009 03:35 pm (UTC)
Thank you Linda, I'm so glad you like it.
May. 25th, 2009 05:29 pm (UTC)
I hadn't gotten a chance to save them. But I'd like to add them to No Reins

Love Linda
May. 25th, 2009 08:29 pm (UTC)
Anytime Sweetie, Thank you.
Love you.
May. 25th, 2009 10:28 pm (UTC)
hugs and love
May. 25th, 2009 01:20 am (UTC)
Abolutely lovely, and enjoyed!!!!

Thanks for sharing.

May. 25th, 2009 03:37 pm (UTC)
I am so glad you like it, thanks you.
May. 25th, 2009 01:24 am (UTC)
That brought tears to my eyes. You did a lovely job with this!
May. 25th, 2009 03:41 pm (UTC)
Thank you Vicki, Sorry for the tears. The song always makes me misty eyed. And I was thinking Ennis might have said those words to Junior.
May. 25th, 2009 08:04 am (UTC)
sooo wonderful and beautiful drawings. thanks a lot for sharing.

Love an hugs,
May. 25th, 2009 03:42 pm (UTC)
Freut mich das es Dir gefaellt.
Danke fuer Dein Kommentar.
May. 25th, 2009 11:19 am (UTC)
Torry, this is very sad, but very beautiful. They'll be together again, but in heaven, this makes me cry
Your drawing is awesome, you're an artist.
I love the drawing of Jack, spread arms betwen the columns.

Thanks for sharing.
May. 25th, 2009 03:46 pm (UTC)
Thank you Marian, I am glad you liked the drawings and the sentiments in the end.
Thank you very much for commenting, it means so much to me.
May. 25th, 2009 01:06 pm (UTC)
hi torry,

oh wow, what a wonderful monday. between enniscake's paper dolls and your pic/poem/song, i'm really feeling the creative vibes!

i love reading along with the illustrations, and especially like the "is it time, jack?" drawing with ennis on the horse... and the ennis remembering back... thanks so much for posting this work of bbm art! jimmy xoxoxoxo
May. 25th, 2009 03:57 pm (UTC)
Jimmy my love, you crack me up. paper dolls? come to think of it they do look like cutouts. LOL.
Thanks for taking a look and I am looking forward to the next adventures of Ennis, Jack, Bobby, Drew, Gary and hairy Nick.
May. 26th, 2009 03:12 am (UTC)
enniscake posted dolls of jack and ennis, soo cute your drawings have depth! ...hairy nick... :D
May. 27th, 2009 04:03 am (UTC)
I forgot Enniscake so sweet. Nick reminded me of my older brother, hairy as an ape but a 6'11 tall ape, we always teased him, poor man he was the only one in the family so hairy.
Take care, hugs,
May. 26th, 2009 08:56 am (UTC)
Aw my Beautiful Lady ! *melting...*
I can't believe the quantity and the quality of the work you done here... what a masterpiece , so powerful , so strongly emotional !
I remember telling you that you were made to tell Stories by your Drawings , it seems that it's a marvellous example here !
I love the way your drawing style seems absolutely fit with fairytale or dreams...
I can feel your mind at work while drawing and how much you're close to your Characters , more than you probably are close to the Characters on your RL often , just like me :))
I would like to know that your drawings are safe in a dedicated place and that one day you take the time to make a real book with all of them love !!!

Congrats, Hugs and major Love from your Frenchie Groupie :)))
(PS : I collected 3 beautiful cards to send to you and I wait for my Hub to go to the Post Office poor Sweetie ! He would like to do it soon as it's for you and he likes you a lot because you always send hugs to him ( well I'm pretty much jealous on this one but I say nothing , hem... :-) )
Just to say I think of you darling and you will hear from me soon !:) )
Much love always
May. 27th, 2009 04:17 am (UTC)
Thank you for your high praise. You know how easy it is when you love the subject you are sketching. The first time I heard that song when my son danced with his daughter at her wedding that was a few years ago. The little girl sprinting is actually my sons granddaughter chasing our husky, she loves that dog. I am thinking about maybe writing a story and putting it on DVD with some illustrations, it's hard to get things published, but I won't dismiss it just yet. Don't be jealous of me, I'm older than dirt and way over here across the ocean. Just want to hug your man for being so sweet to you and taking care of you and running to the post office just to send me your love.
Thank you Dear Heart you make me immensely happy .
Jul. 25th, 2009 07:19 pm (UTC)
What beautiful artwork!
And very touching -- I love the idea of Ennis and Jack having descendents in common, and the artwork has a lovely Edwardian look to it.
Jul. 26th, 2009 01:59 am (UTC)
Re: What beautiful artwork!
Hi Marcia, what a lovely surprise, thank you.
I just thought I like to see Ennis enjoy his daughters wedding day and let Jack be part of it too after all he is part of the family now in my heart and imagination at least.
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