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Happy 4th of July everyone.

 I lost someone very dear to me in this ongoing war, he only had one more week left to serve,
but God chose another path for him.and this poem took me back to what his sacrifice means
to me and why I cherish America and all the men and woman who are in daily peril just to keep
us safe and fight for our freedom. My thanks to them all and may God keep them safe.
Torry

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                       Daddy's Poem

Her hair was up in a pony tail, her favorite dress tied with a bow.
Today was Daddy's Day at school, and she couldn't wait to go.
But her mommy tried to tell her, that she probably should stay home.
Why the kids might not understand, if she went to school alone.

But she was not afraid; she knew just what to say.
What to tell her classmates of why he wasn't there today.
But still her mother worried, for her to face this day alone.
And that was why once again, she tried to keep her daughter home.

But the little girl went to school eager to tell them all.
About a dad she never sees a dad who never calls.
There were daddies along the wall in back, foe everyone to meet.
Children squirming impatiently, anxious in their seat.

One by one the teacher called a student from the class.
To introduce their daddy, as seconds slowly past.
At last the teacher called her name, every child turned to stare.
Each of them was searching, a man who wasn't there.

"Where's her daddy at?' She heard a boy call out.
'She probably doesn't have one,' another student dared to shout.
And from somewhere near the back, she heard a daddy say,
'Looks like another deadbeat dad, too busy to waste his day.'

The words did not offend her, as she smiled up at her Mom.
And looked back at her teacher, who told her to go on.
And with her hand behind her back, she slowly began to speak.
And out from the mouth of a child, came words incredibly unique.

'My Daddy couldn't be here, because he lives so far away.
But I know he wishes he could be...since this is such a special day.
And though you cannot meet him, I wanted you to know.
All about my daddy, and how much he loves me so.


He loves to tell me stories he taught me to ride my bike.
He surprised me with pink roses and taught me to fly a kite.
We used to share fudge sundaes, and ice cream in a cone.
And though you cannot see him... I'm not standing here alone.

'Cause my daddy's always with me, even though we are apart
I know because he told me... he'll forever be in my heart'
With that, her little hand reached up, and lay across her chest.
Feeling her own heartbeat, beneath her favorite dress.

And from somewhere there in the crowd of dads... her mother stood in tears.
Proudly watching her daughter, who was wise beyond her years.
For she stood up for the love of a man no longer in her life...
Doing what was best for her, doing what was right.

And when she dropped her hand back down, staring straight into the crowd.
She finished with a voice so soft...but a message clear and loud.
'I love my daddy very much...he's my shining star.
And if he could, he'd be here...but heaven's just too far.

You see he is a Marine and died just this past year.
When a roadside bomb hit his convoy and taught Americans to fear.
But sometimes when I close my eyes...it's like he never went away.'
And then she closed her eyes...and saw him there that day.
And to her mother's amazement, she witnessed with surprise.

A room full of daddies and children, all starting to close their eyes.
Who knows what they saw before them...who knows what they felt inside.
'I know you're with me Daddy,'...to the silence she called out.
And what happened next made believers, of those once filled with doubt.

Not one in that room could explain it...for each of their eyes had been closed.
But there on the desk beside her...was a fragrant long-stemmed pink rose.
And a child was blessed, if only for a moment..by the love of her shining star.
And given the gift of believing...that heaven is never too far.

 

Comments

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taranryan_13
Jul. 4th, 2009 12:05 pm (UTC)
Very beautiful.

Happy 4th of the July

Neyla
torry28
Jul. 4th, 2009 09:59 pm (UTC)
Thank you and please tell your man how grateful I am to him and all his comrades still away from home.
I bet your boys are over the moon to have Daddy back home not to mention how happy their Mama is to.
Wishing you a bang of a 4th.
Love,
Torry
jacks_key
Jul. 4th, 2009 12:43 pm (UTC)
:(

Absolutely beautiful. Thank you for posting this.
torry28
Jul. 4th, 2009 10:01 pm (UTC)
Thank you Vicki, hope your holiday is relaxing and nice.
Love,
Torry
trekfan
Jul. 4th, 2009 03:19 pm (UTC)
what a touching poem, Torry. I had tears in my eyes. I am sorry for your loved one you lost.

It reminds us of the tremendous sacrifices the men and women in uniform are doing for all of us so we can be free

Hugs and love
Linda
torry28
Jul. 4th, 2009 10:03 pm (UTC)
Hey Linda, Thank you and for the card too, hope your pool party is blast and refreshing.
Love,
Torry
fizzerbass
Jul. 4th, 2009 09:57 pm (UTC)
Torry:

I honestly can't read the poem right now because my Mom's passing is still too fresh but I wanted to let you know how sorry I am for the loss of your friend. Knowing he only had one more week to serve just makes it all the worse.

Please know I am thinking of you and praying you find some comfort and peace. Hugs to you, my dear, sweet friend.

Love, Susan
i_o_r_h_a_e_l
Jul. 5th, 2009 03:38 pm (UTC)
That's so lovely, dear.
nosunlight
Jul. 5th, 2009 05:06 pm (UTC)
I haven't heard from you in a while and I was worrying about you. I hope you had a nice holiday and I'm sorry for your loss.
gnashsang
Jul. 6th, 2009 01:26 pm (UTC)
oh, i love the drawing and the poem too. sorry to hear the sad news, but thank you for posting and making me smile despite the tears. hope your weekend was good, much love to you, jimmy
del_marvelous
Jul. 7th, 2009 11:08 pm (UTC)
What a very moving poem, Torry. Thank you for sharing. I'm very sorry for your loss.
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